Today we brought our laptop to the class because Miss zu want to check our draft essay. She want us to do peer editing. We need to change our essay with other group. For argumentative essay me and Nadia Salihin need to change do the commenting with Fatin and Ika Kardi. So, I give Fatin my soft copy of essay so that she can do commenting. While waiting for Fatin and Ika commenting on our essay, me and Nadia also do the comenting. That's all we do for today. But we have replacement class tonight. We will write an essay again. Huh !At night class, we are doing problem solution essay. As usual Miss zu will explained more detailed to us about that type of essay. Thank god, this essay only have 2 pattern. Miss zu said this problem-solution essay is the most easier. Then, we played a game. But this time we need to put in text citation. We can use goggle to find the information. I'm doing body paragraph and Miss zu said at least has one in text citation in the paragraph. I think this time much better because we are not rushing to do the essay. Hopefully, everything will be fine. Kbye !
outline by fatin and ika kardi
outline by me and nadia salihin